Friday, January 9, 2009

The Amazing Adventures of...

In my Elementary class this morning, I decided to have my students do a little creative writing. The premise of the activity was to write a story called "The Amazing Adventures of..." The student could basically do whatever they want from there. As soon as I began reading over some of the students' shoulders, I knew this was a good idea. A few of these stories are priceless, and I'd like to share some of them with you. The stories are copied exactly as they appear on the paper.

*I should note that there were certain key words that I gave to the students to try and elicit some ideas. This is why you may notice words such as airplane, racecar, or slippery placed randomly within some of the stories.

"The Amazing Adventures of Boxhead"
-by Hojin

There once a man call Boxhead. He was riding a airplane to Korea but the plane felled to a scary place called Zombie Land. He had only a gun. But the Zombies came to him. The only one way to escape. He grabed a rope on the ground and jumped to the sea and blocked the way with barrels but the water zombie there was an frezzer and frezzed zombie. When he turned the barrel was knocked down. He quickly rode on a Boat and shot them with the gun. When he looked down there were many kinds of guns and bombs. He throw it a army of zombie. They all died and with help other Boxheads helped him and killed all of them. So the Zombie Land became Boxhead Land.


"The Amazing Adventures of Tim"
-by Tim

I fight the sister every day. I talking to mom. My sister step in always. I'm very angry. I play every day. I'm very happy. I study every day. I'm very angry. The end.

"The Amazing Adventures of Ellie"
-by Ellie

When the Ellie and puppy go to the park. Ellie like slide. One day, my puppy and Ellie have bicycle. My puppy and Ellie in a bicycle in the play grownd. Ellie bicycle is red and pupple. Next time Ellie family go to airplane. Yesterday I go to racecar have it! It is snowing. Play in snow. Ellie runing home. But slippery. Ellie is happy. The end...

"The Amazing Adventures of Sophie"
-by Sophie

Ones upon there live Sophie. She have airplane, racecar, bicycle. But she really like airplane. She travel with airplane. Then race car, bicycle is angry. Sophie said "sorry." So Sophie on the on by one.

"The Amazing Adventures of Astraunot"
-by Steven

Astrounut went to the space. He went to the moon. He steped on the moon. Then the ailian came out from the creater. Then the ailian catch him and take him in to the creater. He was shocked because he met a ailian in the moon. They keep him to the creater and every day ailian did the experiment with him. Then one day astrounut ran away. But ailian catched him. The next day astrounut die. Because yesterday he tried to ran away. Then the astrounut's brother and his cusions are went to the moon and fight with ailian and they win the ailian and found astrounut's body. And the did the [Korean word] very well.

*I am going to attempt to copy this last one as close to the original as I can, though an exact replication is impossible.

"The Amazing Adventures of Me"
-by Justin

On day I got canada and I way kwithmae cow. do cow ran out and cow ran bak. THE END. 

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